Looks like a neat little adventure, the doodles are charming and the whole concept is interesting: I’ll definitely run it for one of my groups at my FLGS!
This is a cool dungeon for an OSR game. I really like that it is not a dark, underground lair, but rather an open air grove that uses dense brush and thorns as the limiting factor for player movement. That's a fun way to imagine a druid's lair. The map and rooms are well made. Each one feels like they have a reason to be there.
The drawing are very charming. Its such an interesting assortment of animals too. Finally, the Eurasian Hoopoe and the Bilby together at last.
I will say that the game could use a formatting and grammar pass. There are a few parts, like the creature stats, that are a little hard to read as they are now.
thank you so much. It’s feedback like yours that I crave. Sets will give it a rewrite this week. And hope my wife will have a bash at one of The animals. HOOPOE!!! Yeah. If they met the Bibly. Everything would improve. :)
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Looks like a neat little adventure, the doodles are charming and the whole concept is interesting: I’ll definitely run it for one of my groups at my FLGS!
woah thank you so much. And I would love to hear feedback after. I will run it again at an event next week. Pretty excited.
This is a cool dungeon for an OSR game. I really like that it is not a dark, underground lair, but rather an open air grove that uses dense brush and thorns as the limiting factor for player movement. That's a fun way to imagine a druid's lair. The map and rooms are well made. Each one feels like they have a reason to be there.
The drawing are very charming. Its such an interesting assortment of animals too. Finally, the Eurasian Hoopoe and the Bilby together at last.
I will say that the game could use a formatting and grammar pass. There are a few parts, like the creature stats, that are a little hard to read as they are now.
thank you so much. It’s feedback like yours that I crave. Sets will give it a rewrite this week. And hope my wife will have a bash at one of The animals. HOOPOE!!! Yeah. If they met the Bibly. Everything would improve. :)