Rock o' Yurgen

A first draft for the Nameless Scripture Lore Jam - https://itch.io/jam/the-nameless-scriptures-jam

This is my first attempt for Mork Borg type things. And my first attempt at lore. So really looking for feedback, I have three more pieces of lore to put in this entry as well but wondering about design and rational sense of this first one. So please... any feedback. 

"Rock o' Yurgen (and it's umbrella project Rock, Hole, Hat and Moon) is an independent production by ManicPenguinBoy and is not affiliated with Ockult Örtmästare Games or Stockholm Kartell. It is published under the MÖRK BORG Third Party License."

MÖRK BORG is copyright Ockult Örtmästare Games and Stockholm Kartell.